walt understand the structure of a simile poem and write our own about a member of our family or someone we find inspirational
My MUM
As watchful as a hawk, always watching me.
My Mum drinks coffee like a snail, slowly.
She is as clean as soap, tidy.
As bouncy as a tramp, always fun.
Works as hard as a bee, 7 hours a day.
Growes like the boss, because she is.
Kia ora Edward,
ReplyDeleteAn excellent simile poem about your Mum. I like the clever structure of your simile sentences. The flower graphic is also a great touch, way to use your initiative and be creative.