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Friday, August 14, 2020

walt- write paswsively

 Kia ora my name is Edward. I am going to change your mind about online learning. It’s not magic but common sense! 

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Attention Grabber

Firstly I will share with you an interesting fact.

86.2 percent of my class prefer online learning than face to face learning,  and that's not  including me.  That means that 3 people out of 30 don’t like online learning.

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Introduction-state your opinion

From my learning survey I can prove students prefer online learning to face to face in my class.

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The body-3 reasons 

Reason 1. 

I can get more help if I get stuck when I am learning online. Explanation - My teacher is on line for a specific amount of time and my parents are nearby if  I need to talk to them, I don’t have to wait in a line to get my turn for help. 

example- I did email the teacher for help because  I was stuck


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Reason 2.

I can work independently  without many interruptions.

Explanation -  There are no people who will distract me by  talking to me. If I am on line I can ignore people who are not doing the right thing or push the mute button on my computer .

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Reason 3.

My dad thinks I  use a device too much so I'm only allowed the first half of the day online.

Explanation. I use my device more when I am learning online because at home I barely use my computer at all because my dad says  I will get square eyes which is just a saying to keep people off devices. 


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Conclusion-restate your opinions

I really do believe that online learning is better than face to face learning and I think it's the best way to learn for me.

Thank you.

  


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